This month, the prompts are being provided by David M. Gasciogne and posted by Elephant's Child.
Plumage
Sleek
Peripatetic
Agony
Permissive
Pray
and/or
Duty
Colorful
Absent
Mastery
Prey
Orchid
PRETTY AS A PEACOCK by Granny Annie
The crowd watched in agony as Madeline strutted into the room. Some began to pray that this grand-stander would end her peripatetic movements through the crowd. The dress she wore was sleek and fitted to her titillating form. Her hair was so tall and stiff it looked like plumage on a peacock. Everyone knew she was the victim of a permissive upbringing.
Madeline's parents were high-society and it was the duty of the host to invite her to the gathering. Still, many wished she was absent. She had a mastery of flirtation and every eligible bachelor was her prey. She was charmed by various colorful bouquets.
It was sad when a kerfuffle erupted because an orchid bouquet had been presented by a man who was NOT a bachelor and his wife attacked her husband and Madeline. This event came to an abrupt end.
(Great prompts David! I knew it would be full of bird words so I tried a surprise story.)
Fun story!
ReplyDeleteThat was a really good story!
ReplyDeleteThink I knew someone like her:)) I am always impressed how you can take such random words and weave them into a story. Well done.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely fun. I do hope that the Madeline's of this world get their just desserts. Some time. Some where...
ReplyDeleteSirens and their all too willing prey...
ReplyDeleteExcellent.
Nicely done although I feel a little sorry for Madeline, being invited to places from obligation, not because they want her there.
ReplyDeleteReally wonderful story. Love the hair part.
ReplyDeleteMissed Wednesday. I must get my act together!!
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